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K**M
I kinda love this book (Easy to read, not serious content)
This book includes pretty interesting storyline for me. Easy to pick up and read it so shortly with my potato chips. :) But if someone prefers to enjoy serious stories than I would tell it better to skip this book.
K**R
Who doesn't love a sappy love story?
Okay. Yes, it's sappy, and a little PG, but who doesn't love a sappy love story? I find the premise good, but it could have been more. A little too "soft" for my liking, but a nice story none the less.
K**M
So freaking excited!
I first ran across this story on WP and loved it. So glad I have a chance to add it to my e-reader library and no fear it will randomly disappear!
B**J
Has great writing ability, funny but why Kei goes back to Jace is a mystery!
This is one of those books 📚 with a clever idea, developed side characters and the only thing you can't figure out is why Kei doesn't leave after he gets his inheritance. Jace is rude to the point of being obnoxious and then just blows past that. Kei receives a letter saying he must marry Jace to receive his money. Kei is independent and the marriage seems to be in name only. Nothing changes except Kei continues to go to school and becomes Jace's houseboy. I assume that Kei doesn't want to live alone and just goes with the flow until he realizes how much he was betrayed.It has an eighth grade plot, but I like the author's style. I think if she worked out a plot that held water she might have what it takes to write a great contemporary fiction.Hated Jace through to the end.
M**Y
Good premise but not enough character development
This book started out promising but quickly didn't pan out. While the premise was good, the character development was just lacking and the grammar was juvenile. Inserting asterisk into vulgar language is not how adults talk. Editing was non existent and at times it was hard to read. May I suggest that the author has proof readers review the book before publishing.
L**S
Very hard to read.
This book was hard to read be cause it is not written in an appropriate American style. The grammar is not what we consider proper English. It reads like it was written by a child or a person who does not speak English as their primary language. I was not surprised at all when I got to the end and discovered the the author. The storyline was good but the grammar was awkward.
Y**T
Isn’t it amazing?
The book was amazing, the plot and the drama was the most exciting part. I’m glad I came across this book on WP.
R**N
Very young author
Reality is this books dialog reads like something kindergartners would say. Like, you booger nose. Temper tantrums, silly apron that brings on laughing fit. That's as far as I got. She writes well. Good sentence structure. The problem is she needs a few more years of living.
N**K
The idea was good but it badly needs editing
I enjoyed the idea behind the book (which is why I gave 2 stars and not 1), but the author is in dire need of an English speaking editor. It needs proper sentence structure and better line editing. No one speaks like that. It was annoying to read.Like I said, it was a good plot. I would have preferred having them fall in love over a period of time vs. from one paragraph to the next. The author missed out there, especially as it could have easily entwined with the existing story.
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